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"Constructive Criticzism..."
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Aight, I won't give it to ya like a prick, I was here once, and Ill help you get out of it....
#1...work on your vocab ALOT! go find some old ass english books and study your ass off!...vocab = great piece....
#2...Make your line alot longer....count syllable dogg...no more than 16, no less than 13...that'll improve your flow...
#3...Make your verses at least 12 lines long (with the new addition of syllables) to make the piece last longer....if this was done in audio, it would be a 30 second song...lol...so longer verses...
#4...The syllable count is the same for the hook (chorus)...only make it 4-8 line (bars) long....
*NOTE: If the hook is 4 bars long, it's best to repeat twice. 8 bars long, recite only once....
#5...Inturnals...work on your inturnal rhyming...
Bad Example: I'm the CAT in the BLACK HAT, bringing the GAT
Notice the "at" sound repeats...thats an inturnal rhyme...
#6...Multis....basically, and inturnal rhyme with more syllables...
Example (Eminem): "it's like a FIGHT TO THE TOP just to see who'd DIE FOR THE SPOT"...
Notice the same sounds repeated throughout more than one syllable...
Focus on these main things, and it should increase you rskill...any furthr questions, or want me to help out more....
AIM: KonstantDNile
Feel free to hit me up son, always glad to help a felow emcee get away from the pain of wackness...lol....
Stay spittin, keep elevatin, we all start somewhere.....
P.E.A.C.E.
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