Interestin....

Deush-
I think yours had the better flow out of the two, but your vocab could do some serious upliftin. Your punches were strong every once and a while and some of the lines took away from your consistency.

BMC-
You have an intriguing ryme scheme. It threw me off a lil but I caught on. Your lines could use some lengthening to improve the flow, but you have good complexity. You had strong lines, but they seemed empty without a setup or follow up line.

like:
bitch you only wishin fission with fissures gets ya/
i'm sicker than the plague you a hague/
^that coulda been better if you had a line that complimented the first one instead of jumping into the next.

Vote=Deushy

pz