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"My 2 Cents..."
IP:
The bars were to sloppy, not constructed well enough, I suggest you focus on the key elemants of hip hop lyrics...Flow, Construction, Delivery...then worry about uppin your vocab an tryin to come with deep shit...because you need to be able to wite before you can put words together...feel me? So worry about gettin a flow you're confortable with...then get your vocab...then make a rep...whatever you're best at, stick to it son....
Stay spittin......
P.E.A.C.E.
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