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Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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Freshly killed meat... which is to say this was raw. In so many words.
I wouldn't say this sucks, not at all. I would however say this is conventional, and that is to say it didn't have that... ringing noise... that comes with well executed poetry. But to be honest, most poems don't have that ringing noise I hear with good poetry. Still, it had some good points in it, especially the ending of the waste of beauty part. Not exactly surprising, but noticebly well written nonetheless.
Personally I couldn't relate, I can't find beauty in a pearl. I find beauty in pixels.
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