i think i got this....like you don't know what to do... that she did something or whatever and now you jus think'n bout shit... sumth'n like that....

so within a three minute mark....this was gud... but that line that goes....

would spend my last dying breath for her

is say'n that you would but now you wouldn't, you atleast coulda elaborated on that....why.........? you get me....

well anyways....overall nice piece...

...........7/10