Have you been on here before? Or are you a new member?

Cos i can't seem to remember ya...and this was another exceptional piece...from what seems, an exceptional poet...

I'd say this is best when done on open mic (i.e. verbal, rather than written...sorry if that sounds patronising...)...

..but that's not to say it aint good in writing...well more than good...i mean it's so hard to depict emotions so raw and powerful in the style you did....well it is....as long as there's a couple of strong, outstanding words every three lines....but you elevated to a level above that...i mean it actually had a lot of substance...and a lot of depth...and to tell ya the truth...quite original too....(the 'topic' that is)...

...it hit kind of hard and deep, for reasons beyond explanation (or maybe i just don't want to tell...cos it's so fuked up!)...but yeah, i mean it's got some real personal kind of depth to it with me....which may sound kind of weird...no, may sound weird, full stop (without the kind)....pah!...either way, i dannae care...

...anyway....very nice piece...respect...