I dunno...i felt it was kind of 'off and on'....like the emotions only came out in short bursts...with the effect being that the rest is just lacking...

...almost like theres so much powerful emotions you wanted to release...but the creative channels were so few this time....that it became more grinded....and that's how this piece came to be...

...i mean it had it's moments...and i felt part of it dragged the piece overall along to make it quite a raw piece....i could see a certain amount of your powerful emotions in it...

...but what i'm saying is, maybe not enough...

...it's happened to me before...when the channels just burst or dissapear, leaving you with too few creative channels to depict the emotions you feel in a way which can enable the reader to feel a certain amoutn of them...


....i say all this, cos i've seen some of your other pieces....and so thats what it seems like to me...

....respect...