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"My 2 Cents..."
IP:
Well I have some CC for ya dog....
I like the central meaning behind htis piece, and the overall topic of this drop. The stayle of writing you use is to damn hard to read...I hate paragraph form verses...shit gets to cluttered, you have vocab, and you have descent wordplay...but you can focus more on gettin your verses in Bar form, and make your verses more coherent....
I really had no problem with this drop other than the formation of the verse....This was and Ill ass pice dog, keep spittin.......
P.E.A.C.E.
Return the favor pl.......
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