SHIT!! ur well deep! dat woz a dope peice, tha way u put all those feelins into one poem n still kept me intersted even tho tha length. u finnished off well puttin a conclusion to tha whole poem.
i admire u becoz u can put so many feelins and exspress dem in a poem, im still learnin how to. WELL DONE!
peace ~roX~

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im capable of anything my amagination can give me wings, like doves flyin over streets watching many things//Nas