I don't know man, I'd have to hear you flow to those beats...
You flow was pretty good, but could have been smoother...
Now your wordplay and rhymes... those need more work than your flow... they're simple... and your consept's been heard over and over... vocabulary was pretty simple too... I ain't saying you got to have that complex ass canibus like vocab... but still, it shouldn't be that simple... let cats know your able to rhyme with more difficuld, more diverse words is what I'm trying to say...
You ain't whack to me... you straight... just keep working on it...