^it may flow in audio but this is text and everyone usually has a different beat in their head if one at all, you have to imply the flow. For this one to flow better you should combine each sentence together... such as...

Like I Cant Hold My Own,
As If Theyll Get Me Well Exceptionally,
I Cant Let These Fuckas Talk
They Aint Worth Shit Till Tha Death Of Me,

...To...

Like I Can't Hold My Own As If Theyll Get Me Well Exceptionally/
I can't Let These Fuckas Talk They Aint Worth Shit Till Tha Death Of Me/

That give it a better flow.... Uppin this bitch for more replies!...

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