I thought it was alright...

...i mean it had good imagery...you detailed it so the reader could relate to what youre saying more...

...also quite cliche...i felt it was at times blunt...

...but yeah, i mean it's alright...i feel ya, love n all...

...and after just pouring my inner self into a piece, this aint the best of replies...but i feel i've made fair comments...


...respect...