this is to dres "the next episode"

close your eyes fo' i get hold of the mic/
judge with your ears and not your eyes i gaurantee you that its somethin youll like/
you need to understand that just cause im white/
doesnt mean that my rymes dont shine like bright light/
with my verbal attack, ill make your pupils contract/
the shit is blinding like flippin a swith in pitch black/
but ill come back to jump on this track, pick up your slack/
and teach a rap lesson wit the skill that you lack
im only seventeen/
and im the best youve seen/
i cant be apprehended so you know my records clean/
im all about the green/
im down for bumpin beans/
but when it comes to shootin up ill leave it for the feinds/
im not a thug i just react like one/
i wouldnt let the tv make me act like one/
but if you wanna fuckin ask i might be backed by one/
i got a million motherfucker youll get slapped by one/
dont you try to stand in my way/
back the fuck up/
bitch you aint got nothin to say/
shut the fuck up/
i thought i told you that i was a killa/
the thrilla in manilla and ill pillage your village just like attila/


it stops abrubtly cause its a work in progress, tell me what ya think so far