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I'll actually reply...
yo man, I don't think anyone has posted something like this before, your topic was good man, i was feeling the concept, pretty deep and original, but your wordplay man, your rhymes, they needed your... you had had better rhymes, stronger vocab, and made it a bit longer, this would have been an ill peace...
I give you props on content alone dawg... should try to re-write it
Peace
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