ummm...couldn't feel sum parts of this poem...i wouldn't go to the extent of say'n it was wack...but it lacked parts of what a poem should have...like clarity, and on sum lvl you should relate with the reader...not the case her...i know i'm not mak'n that much sense...but bear with me...

personally, i didn't like the repeativly go'n back to the treasure of the pearl...but it seems that that was what this poem was kinda bout...

rat'n....5/10

jus me...sum ppl might not feel like me