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Old 09-02-06, 10:58 PM   #15
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Out

i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around
the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down
>>Not a good opener.

u will never get a rep son, unless ya curlin ur eyelash
n ya verses are as enjoyable to read like a book without a climax
>>Poor attempt at creativity.

you ain't my boy or his boy, never had friend..gave names to objects
so if we ever remain in 'contact'...it's my fists plowin thru ya optics
>>You had a concept but bad delivery.

say Out stop it like i had ur girl sprawled out on my bed sheets
videotaped it...
n ima send u the Snipet's..leavin that pussy blacker than Wesley
>>No.

claim ur on deck, next to make hits..but everyone knows ya wack boy
cuz u'll never make a single, so get comfy becoming rap's new bat boy
>>This isn't really a punch.

keystyled this quick because honestly i don't give a fuckin shit
n if i had shit to give....SMG would be encrypted all over the bitch
>>Not hitting.


SMG

This is absurd...
...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya
It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's
>>Nothing great... bad wording.

You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya
This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters
>>Good concept but weak execution.

And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro
Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video
>>This was cool.

A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob
Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed...
>>Not bad, but similies get tiring.



Vote: SMG

Way bette concepts and just hit a lot harder in general.
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