Voted For: Mystic.

FIRST OFF...LET ME BEGIN WITH A BIG LOL @ 2 OF MY NAMES BEING MENTIONED IN THIS ONE VERSE...

Im holdin that Slicknife everytime I swing im slicin at ya ribs
My Tech Skillz have ya brains hanging low like u was wit tha boy jibbs
--WAK WITH NO PUNCH..YOUR WHOLE VERSE IS JUST GIMICKS--
You switched ya style up real fast dog dont act like i didnt notice
But my Theory is you didnt write half of it..you bit and stole it
--DECENT PUNCH, JUST WORK ON YOUR WORDING--
Your better off changing your Eyedentity but still they'd pay-u-less
Shit mine aswell just give me the the ring...
...................n ill put an arrow through ya body n leave u leg-a-lus
--WAK...THANKS FOR THE 1ST NAMEDROP THOUGH--
You didnt elevate after takin a break...your punches just mys-tic
I could put my face up to your screen n u still couldnt hit it!
---1ST LINE SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE 2ND LINE---
Im winning this series you can't beat me...just try n match
ill give you a lil push to start Rawking....
................But its like shit hit the fan cuz you came flyin back!
---COULD HAVE WORDED BETTER...YOUR FLOW IS STRETCHED---
You rhymin whack you aint ill u dreamin like a fuckin Mimesis
You wont win damn didnt think it'd take u 2 times to realize this
---WAK NAME DROP--
So you wanted another shot i wont turn you down whore....fine
I would bold some more ppl who merked you...
.....................But shit im Precize and dont got any more lines
---STARTED OUT DECENT BUT YOU GAVE UP AT THE END---

ALL IN ALL YOUR VERSE WAS BELOW MEHHH...NOTHING HOT AT ALL. FROM WHAT i HEARD YOUR ILL AT TOPICAL BUT PUNCHLINE BATTLES AINT YOUR THING. THIS VERSE WOULD EASILY COST YOU A WIN BATTLING ANY NEWBIE. ELEVATE THE BATTLE SCENE MAN. THIS WONT GET TOO MANY VOTES.

VS.


The link above show this kid been played with Dumblines
Battle Erel Avent an thought he could beat him with a Cum line...
--WORDING IS WAK BUT THE CONCEPT WAS OK...DONT RHYME THE WORD LINE WITH LINE EVER AGAIN---
He'll get revoked in this battle I provoked, choking like a first timer's smoke
This I quote, his skills beyond broke, even his avatar proves he's a pass joke...
--HE'LL GET REVOKED? WTF? YOU JUST THROWING WORDS AROUND MAN, WHOLE SHIT WAS WAK---
so really lets raise the stakes and spit venomous like u played with snakes
sprayed the eight, that'll leave more holes on ya then the foctory of crates.....
--RAISED THE 8? YOUR MULTIES ARE THERE IN THIS ONE BUT STOP SAYING STUPID SHIT THROW A FUCKING PUNCH MAN.--
When rex flexed his mad text, I smash necks then ask, "Next?"
His guns are full of shit, even his finger proves that he packs an "assed text" ......
---SELF GLORIFICATION IS WAK, ITS JUST A FILLER---
His whackness reminds me of a candy, the way he'll spit it "Now and Later"
No doubt I am greater, but mystic couldn't "elevate" if he wrote in elevators.....
---SUPER PLAYED, I USED BOTH THOSE PUNCHES WHEN I FIRST STARTED RAPPING---
Truth is, I spit congruent rhymes, that are fluent, while his come up truant
So just like mystic in Mexican empires, this kid and location will end up in ruins....
---STRETCHED...WAK...AND HOW THE FUCK ARE YOUR RHYMES CONGRUENT? DO YOU KNOW THE MEANING OR WHERE YOU JUST TOSSING IT IN THERE FOR THE PERPOSE OF MULTIES?--

YOUR VERSE JUST MADE ME BELIEVE THAT YOU DIDN'T WANT TO EVER ELEVATE. YOU NEED TO READ UP ON BATTLES AND SEE HOW PEOPLE WRITE THERE SET UPS AND DROP WITTY PUNCHES AT THE END. I MY SELF HAVE PROBLEMS WITH WORDING BUT YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THE OVER ALL VERSE MAN. STOP AND THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU WRITE...READ IT AGAIN AND AGAIN IF YOU SERIOUSE ABOUT IT BEFORE YOU DROP AND THINK...WILL THIS VERSE DESTROY THE OTHER GUY OR ATLEAST BE ENOUGH TO GET THE WIN? YOU CYPHER VERSES AND BATTLE VERSES ARE TOO MUCH ALIKE AND THEY SHOULDN'T BE MAN. FOLLOW MY ADVICE COZ IF YOU JUST KEEP DOING WHAT YOUR DOING WRONG OVER AND OVER AND IT AINT WORKING STOP DOING THAT AND TRY SOMETHING ELSE MAN.

V/RICCARD

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