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aight..yo..basically u gota work on everything here...heres how to do this..:

Flow: work on flow by studying a comprised group of emcees you respect the most in the game, study their flows and try counjour a unique flow thatl use aspects of ya choiced groups flow..

Delivery: Same as flow, study artists with delivery's youre feeling and try emulate them all in one delivery..if you can..obviously dnt choose like freeway and lil wayne it wudnt mix..

Lyrics: They were ok, they sound like youre a text head jumpin into audio..its mad diff on the audio scene you gota make it flow and ride to the beat..again lsiten to cats..adjust..

Emotion: Thisll come as confidence gets up...right now its monotonous..and very one-levelled...confidence rises..fluctuation occurs and your emotion is conveyed to the audience..

How To Improve Other ways:

These arent every way but the way I did it;

- Make tracks, like this and drop on websites like these...every peice of constructive feedback you get...copy and paste it in your word document and save it...for your next track read that over try fix it...

- Itll never happen straight away..if sum1 says fix ya flow by doing this......blah blah blah...dnt get mad cos next joint its not perfect..it takes months/years of polishing..

- Dont get cocky..ive made this mistake before around ya level when i first started...now im more polished...but still dnt be so cocky that you look like a fool..

- Get that thrive to succeed...

Hope shit helped..1

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