this is the songs forum, not the "be a fuckin' idiot" forum. Don't got anything good to say don't post bs feed when people are being serious and tryin' to get feedback.

anyways, to song. like the When I'm gone beat.

First thing I notice, quality. and that mixed with your vocals being pretty low, made it real hard to listen, nah mean? but iunno your flow, seems like you paid no attention to the beat and just were reading off your lyrics. TRry writing to the beat, so you can flow better. for starters, just try getting your rhymin' words to land on the snare.

but shit I gotta go, i'll come back to leave better feed. but don't give up and let idiots like the one above say shit to make you stop. IF you want it bad, don't let them put you down, keep tryin' and you'll get better. pc

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