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Old 09-03-06, 06:48 PM   #5
Pakaveli
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Originally Posted by wiley d
i mean i started to like it ,but i mean i dont know if it is because im young and i have more to learn cause i didnt understand half of the stuff you was saying

as being poetry ..i think this piece was good
but as a verse to a song it was very illliterate and wack



Don't mind me saying this Wiley, but your contradicting yourself.....your saying you didn't understand half the stuff i said but then go on to call me/ my writing illeterate. Seriously, think before you write.
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