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Old 09-04-06, 01:59 AM   #13
Dickard.
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Voted For: Sinful

Ablahblahblahkilla-Your style is sooooooooo whack, no hate but seriously you neeed to fucking fix your structure so the reader can actually see the punch you are preparing..and shit. I mean your lyrics were so elementary they had no meaning or serious punches man...just whack.

Sinful-Your verse was meh okay you had some good attempts at punches but nothing reall that good...your basically winning becuz you didnt come as whack as your oppoenent though you didnt come that strong eithe.r....other than that you win

v/sinful
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