aight... werk on yo flow, like, make it go 2 tha beat better. ummm, ur rappin pritty quietly, u should like, yell in that muthaphukka. lyrics were pritty simple, buts thats normal. n u kinda messed up, like i just heard tha part where ur like "people say they can quit whenever they... feel" like u messed up when u were spozed 2 say "feel", so if u do that, dont just leave it like that, u should re-record that part 2 make it sound better. nom sizlaxin?
werd