alright i jus listened to it but im listening to it again jus so i dont miss anything

this beat is hot. for real. definitely matches the emotion that you wanna capture for this kinda song. i like the kids playing in the intro.

your first verse kicks right in. as for emotion i think u got that. lyrically this was real cool. its always cool to hear someone jus let go of things and lay it out on a track. that part where u started talkin about church and God was real cool. i remember going through that same phase.

chorus - im not feelin this as much as the verse. but the lyrics and the message are good

second verse comes in. this is actually a good song. i like how real you're rapping. those are the best songs. it seems like u really dug deep to let this kinda stuff out.



overall a pretty good song. the only thing i wasnt too excited about was the chorus, but those verses were well written. good job man. keep it up