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Old 09-05-06, 02:37 PM   #12
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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beat is cool of course sample is nice
flow was pretty cmooth lyrically i liked you your lisp sounds sexy on this you have definately been working on this so props man delivery and emotion fits the track well
3rd verse i really liked for some reason everyones got in trouble for writing shit when youre bored in class lol
talking can be upped the whole outro could be upped a little bit
a little bit a noise at the end there that coul be removed
solid track youve elevated alot hit me up for a collab
rtf - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234545
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