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Old 09-05-06, 02:47 PM   #3
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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beat sounds pretty cool
intros cool added a nice touch to the track
i think you could be turned up a little lyrically you came pretty nice
love the flow on the hook and delivery props on the hook
2nd verse same thing nice flow lyrically you came pretyt nice
i like the outro added nice touch
pretty cool track overall i liked it maybe just up the volume a little bit

rtf- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234545
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