the intro was nice, just stacked too many vocals on top of one another, it wasn't off key, it was just flatter notes, it all worked with the key of the beat though...ya'll got skills, the hook is dope...verses are definetly nice too, better mixing on the intro would make this track even better yo
you mixed things the opposite way "..been through so much in my life...one thing that I know.." that should be louder and the other part should sound more like backround vocals cuz that's what they really are...this track's dope, being family your voices blend better than they would if you weren't and that definetly works in your favor, because you two have a really nice vocal blend
ya'll got a MySpace paGe?