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Old 09-06-06, 01:24 PM   #5
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rexless your verse was good alot of images from your verse comes to mind i can actully see what u doing by reading your verse i thought that was good flow good to.
peace your verse was also very good of a read the images was def there an i felt the multis you put flow very well together nice job.
thesinnister i looked at your verse if thats what u call it an figuerd why are you here? i didnt think your verse went well with the piece for this you took a different apporuch an it hurted you very much so i wasnt feeling noting you had to say an thought it would of been alot better without your verse sorry

rex & peace verse 9/10
sinnister 0.1/10

good job you 2
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