Originally Posted by Yvonne

*listening*

whoa PT ur mic was mad loud...but w/e...yeah u had a nice flow on this..lyrics were alright!...yeah decent job



luciano...well yeah u came with some sick lyrics...i feel ur flow wud have been a lot more better...cos i know u can flow pretty well..here it seemed like u were rushing some words and it kinna turned ur flows off at some spots..

Originally Posted by 9th Degree

1st Verse (Past Tense): Vocals were mixed well, not as loud as other people have been saying. Flow was straight, didn't really fall off majorly anywhere. Delivery was alright too, but that seemed to be pretty much all you had going for you. As far as your lyrics go, nothing really stood out to me, kept it pretty simple. But hey, at least you're not trying to sound like Young Jeezy anymore, right?

2nd Verse (Luciano): First off, your vocals are mixed a little loud...home setup? Well, others have already noticed it, so I'll leave it at that. Delivery is alright, could use some more bass in your voice. Though I did like how you rolled the "r" on "rap star" in your first bar. Lyrics were ok, "Stay with 2 Clipse, I'm so Phareal like I'm a Trackstar" was highlight of your verse. However, that line as well as others had concepts I've heard a few times before (i.e. the "Franchise" line).