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Old 03-01-03, 02:42 PM   #3
AJay
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The repitition didnt really work, find music boring when it repeats itself, I liked the start though:
"You better reconnect to reali/ty
Recheck your lyrical abili/ty
Before you chase publici/ty
You lack verbal manoeuvrabili/ty
Yo am serious you need a thera/py"

Try using longer lines and shorter repeats
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