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Old 03-01-03, 03:19 PM   #9
Termz.
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votedetonata

Overall Better Verse But You Had
A Few Played Lines , That Lost A
Few Points For Your Verse .

Quote:
how you gonna call me a clown, when ur prolly biting others...
we could have a Paint Fight, then id beat you with Flying Colours


Second Line Was Nice , But The First Line Was Pure Filler lol.

Quote:
guess you must be proud of my seimen, when you swallow ur pride


Don't Use Cum Lines . . .

But Overall Detonata Took This Hands Down.

ExcusiveDA, You Definitly Need A Lot Of Work, Mis-
Directed Punches , Newbie Style. Played Verse
Overall Weak . . . Keep Working , But As Of Now, I
See No Potential Of ExclusiveDA.

pz.