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Old 09-07-06, 08:39 PM   #38
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
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u tight regardless fam

u a white boi wit skill

so 4 that much u holdin it down

im jus sayin in a BATTLE...it would be a rap lol

ya u rap kinda commercial..which is jus basic

u sayin wha eva is gone rhyme and fit the beat..once u start writeing more
and takeing your time in putting your content together..u gone be sumtin 2 fuck wit
u allready got flow and mic prescense..so jus add some lyrical content..and its a wrap
i need 2 work on ridein a beat better..and better mic prescense and pronouncing
some of my words..but ima lyricist all day everyday..out of the few songs ive did so
far ..everysong has them punchlines..or a part thats gone make u say damn

lyrics and punches win battles there fam

thats why i feel u couldnt fuck wit me in that catagory..

but in makein an overall better track..u would probly get that
until i up my ante
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