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Old 09-08-06, 12:41 PM   #10
DaTrusHurtz
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Bitch we know that ain't your kid, fuck this pedofile's wack
See everyone has a Destiny < so give them THEIR child back

vs.

I know what you're going for, see that's my little sister in the pic i used..
..but the overweight red cheeked bitch on ya left? what's your excuse!
There you go chilling at the white house, but believe i'll put this puss in order,
peeped your eyebrows and immediately noticed you're a BUSH supporter
The heavier it is it floats better, that's tested so consider it a rule,
with that being said...
..tell your bitch to let the vest go, there's no way she'd ever drown at the pool

Not a bad battle. Flash, your verse was okay, just lacked in quotables. Opener, jackie chan, and hanes lines, I felt those were all almost quotable, but not quite witty enough to be so. Destiny's Child shit was really funny tho. I felt Aeral came much more fresh. Other than that played bag line, the rest was pretty good. Opener especially hit harder. Aeral, work on being a little less wordy tho, improved flow would help you, but you got this.

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