lol @ a 6 line battle... its so short i'll do it bar by bar

Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
seen some similar concepts, but its still personal so its okay
i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name
eh, seen a bunch of last letter type things.. kinda bland
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school
another decent nameplay

vs.

First off - ya lines are repitive and unoriginal..
Hell, i could mock ya whole damn style..
..But i ain't tryna send Butler a subliminal..
wording seemed to be a bit indirect on this
N i heard about ya girl - dat relationship's not doin good..
..But its' ironic how WE call her Lady Luck the way she knockin on wood..
seems a bit played, but pretty cool
Keep talkin as i get wild and clinch..
..N leave you pleased as punch - gun, and some other violent shit..
I'm just not a fan of these "violent" type punches

I wish Artistik hadn't come with 3 nameplays, that kinda took away from his verse and if I had seen more nameplays on Eddie I'd prolly give him this, but i haven't so most of that was fresh. Eddie, I feel like you beat around the bush sometimes when you write. You got the idea, you just don't come as directly at him as you could.

Vote - Artistik