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Old 09-09-06, 03:27 PM   #9
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im keeping it clear, out in the streets is where this weakling appears...
yeh, youve got the groundwork to do well...so good luck in your sweeping career
..lmfaooo! dope man. this was deifnately nice!..
you suck kid & talk about feeding - your not a star as such...
how you gonna make it to the real thing
..............................when you couldnt EVEN playoff my bar above???
..WHAT!! sweet! i've never seen this used like this before. this was fresh/original, yet i don't feel as if peeps are gettin it???..

vs.

My braggings strong, you cant come for the ride----get dragged along
Get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
..nice concept, but since i've used punches similar to his, it doesn't his as hard as it could, but i like how u intwined the hook in there, so that gave it some harshness back..
You dumb bitch, no one knows your alive
When friends bring Knife to gunfights...they leave em there n hope that he dies
..HAHAHAHA! this was funny and dope. damn good line here. plus i haven't seen it yet..

damn good battle this week. best i've seen all week as well. will probably be battle of the week, to. nick, u had the cleverness and wit intwined wit ur punches. even though i felt ur second was harder than ur first, u definately came in with two solid punches. slick, u had two dope punches i was feelin alot. the groundwork wordplay was a dope idea and i have never seen play-off lines been used like that. u actually revived an old concept into somethin dope. cool battle guys but i gotta give it to slick for bein more consistant imo. g/l ya'll.

v/ slicKnife
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