myself- This was a good piece. I liked the way you approached and the quotes. Your imaginary was good, I had a picture in my mind of the people being trapped under debris and scraps of metals, made me think of ants, Lol. Your take on the Topic was refreshing, actually it gave me some inspiration to write. The metaphors in your verse was very decent, I liked it, also along with your wordplay, very creative. Uh damn I wish I can explain more But I gots to get to work..Grrrr good verse.

Kool Col-B..Nice verse, really made me laugh, it was very much entertaining. Again I have to go to work, wish I can explain more, but I can say this more people on this site need to write something like Kool Col B, not something generic. Good verse


"the topics aren't the problem.

the shitty cliche topicals you unoriginal dick shits write are"

...So on that note. My vote goes to Myself, I really did Liked Kool Col-B, if he wrote more and detailed more in his verse, using metaphors ect ect to support his storyline, I would vote for him. Good battle.

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