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Old 09-11-06, 08:28 PM   #38
Black Dragon
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beat is simple.....but helps ya topic...so it's all good

1st Verse - flow is on point.......lyrics is strate......feelin da story........feelin ya delivery......and ya quality is nice....
Hook - came in loud ass hell.....but otha than that it's a dope hook
2nd Verse - ya flow is strate......lyrics are basic......and u could up ya delivery.....seems like ya didn't give much effort to ya verse.....
Hook - same as above
3rd Verse - ya lyrics are tyte on this.......feelin ya delivery on this man....ya flow is strate.......yo i'm feelin this verse the best so far........
Hook- same as above
4th Verse - ya quality sounds different from everyone else........but ya flow and all that is on point....ya ridin tha beat the best out of all MCs......ya delivery is strate.......tyte shit....

Overall - this is one hot track..........well keep droppen.....

pz

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