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Old 03-01-03, 11:41 PM   #3
The Necromancer
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Did you know that when Hyena's laugh they do so not because they are sadistic freaks, but laugh when they get scared. Cool huh?

Anyway, this poem... I'll be honest. I don't understand it. Subject was kinda iffy if you know what I mean. It seemed pretty good when I read it in my head but when I read it aloud the words didn't flow right in my mouth. It's structured kinda like a bottle of sand in space after the bottle had just been shattered. But besides the actual lack of the metaphorical girdle, it's all good.

Mo-mentai.
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