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Old 09-13-06, 05:30 AM   #3
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A Reflection Of The Past
 
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i loved the structure bro i even like using it gives the poem a nice feeling and smooth flow while reading, the emotion was okay i thought, you had excellent imagery in this very solid, the wording and vocab was decent...just keep at it man my boy po' wit is mos def gonna be rv's next big poet....so watch out peopl this kid means business
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