This was alright nothing to write home about,...

flowed alright but the open was well messy.

aint got time for the emotions and feelings
cause i was dedicated to this relationship like a mothers devotion to children
now my heart is broken and i need healing
*Sends your flow off ^ keep your syllables to around the same length

The rest in regard to flow was nice, vocab pretty basic didn't add anything
that stands out.

Emotions were deep, not much complexity. All in all this was an alright OM

Stay up and keep writing

1~