Thread: Love Life
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Old 09-13-06, 07:46 AM   #12
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This was nice really liked the opening bars,...

You would love life if your life was filled with love
this is exactly what that wonderful feeling doese
shell fill your life with love, and put love in ya life
she can be the rain of dreams thats flooding your night
Dope

Nice flow vocab was nice can be up-ed a little everyones can to be
fair... Concept was nice. And this was a good read I enjoyed it.

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