your shit is str8. the quality is nice. Lyrics aint really feeling to much on the first shit. the beats is tight even though your lyrics aint all that coz you got too many wak fillers like "you better duck quick" and a few other wak lines coz you aint had nothing to rhyme with...

your voice sounds kinda gay fam...no hate but the vocal effects you put on it sound a bit rediculouse and yo know that aint your real voice man...ICP is wak dont follow they foot steps if you want to be taken seriouse man.

All in all...this wasn't too bad...a lot better then most other shits Ive heard but with the few quirks I mentioned....2nd beat is sick though. Whose is it?

well just work on your voice and your lyrics, for the most part you just need to use better metaphore and personals and shit when dissing some one. try shit that would get mu fuckas hooked into your shit.

5.5/10 <---and thats not bad so dont get offended...you gotta be 2 pac to get higher then a 8 with me fam.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..