Thread: Rap Or Die
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Old 09-15-06, 01:54 AM   #6
wiley d
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ya first verse was either wack or a lil more than wack to me
first verse i give a 5/10
second verse i give a 8.5 /10
i think you started to think more on the second verse and thats why it came out so good


i was feeling this part when you said:

I rob funds, wit a collection of mob guns
Never stuck around the scene when the law comes
I could make a whole grip....wit no hits
And I dont need Ne-Yo to tell me im so sick
You blow dick, im just gettin on my grown shit

oh yeah and give me feedback on mine



i aint got time(is love really worth it ?????)-wiley d
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