Listenin'...
I think you got a lil too much reverb on this..thats my only complaint..
Delivery: This is working alot for you, in this track you spoke up with confidence and delivered the emotion perfectly...
Emotion: Flowing off the delivery comment, emotion is perfect here..you can tell you meant it and I feel what you mean about your pops, this is real you can tell that you rlly feelign this...
Flow: Havent heard it fall off in this track...it stayed on beat
Hook: When I first heard it to be honest i was like ehh...kinda ruined the song but it got better and grew on me...alot..
Lyrics: Personal...Good
Overall:
Fam, audio-wise you kept this song real nice, also you had that emotion and deepness and I respect that...this is definitely a dope song..
***Downloads***
Yo fam when we gonna collab man?..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234990
can you rtf please