talk shit about me? im'a show 'em
a fucked up Stanza like I wrote a bad poem.
I don't mean to be a jerk, slow down - u excessive talker
.. cuz i'll have Stan drivin' off bridges, like Eminem's stalker.

vs.

You Want To Try me man i'll Blow out Your chest
And You;ll Be Like Juelz Santanna.....Human Crack In The Flesh!

Euth got this here, Stanza, it's great you show up for the league every week on time, you are a good member of the league. You just haven't really learned to deveolop punchlines yet, even that quotable was shaky. Your stuff is just too indirect and doesn't have that wit element to it. Keep readin' more verses from the great ones and you'll improve. Euth, not a great verse, but better, the Stan line was pretty cool, Stanza nameplay was obvious but it hit, rest was aight i guess, you got this.

Vote - Euthanize