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Old 09-16-06, 02:58 PM   #5
Young Kidd (LM)
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Sample is Nice. lol. Beat is cool, I like it, simple but effective.

Voice/Deliv./Flow. Is NICE i love the way your voice sounds, and the way you work it around the beat, shit's illy. Plus the quality is nice.

Maybe add a little Swag/Flare to teh lyrics to make them POP more, but it's still pretty nicce...
Chorus is okay, could of been a little more... add a little more emotion to it. And switch it around a little..but really..

It's a nice Track man..Good ups..
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