Voice Is Crazy....
I Like the beat..flow is kinda off, but it's alright, not really that bad just a word everyone once in a while seems like it's rushed to get in there...
The emotion is Nice though, you keep good emotion during the verse ...just work on enunciating words more and not pushing them together..i do that sometimes to...
Work on flow a little, develop a little more into your own..but otherwise..it was an okay track..
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