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Old 09-16-06, 10:14 PM   #8
Stanza.
Please excuse My Sickness
 
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M dropped on time, I came late, but don't be poppin' a smile
Since cats still gon' be sayin "M-U-Late!" cuz you copy my style
...LOL Damn.....I liked that...
Got it now? MM's weak as hell, get beat when i'm writin' wild
So i'll give MMA ass kickin' without even using the fightin' style
......Blehh...

Your first line was strpng you shoulda switch them round and made it your closer ......But anyway you dropped a 50% decent verse

MM
Get dealt a beating, Jack i've never felt ya readings
But ya got this win in the bag<---to help ya breathing
....Meh!...
I'll leave you slump'd on da floor, only cuz im punishing more
Dejavu, hangovas in sperm clinics haven't i son'd you before
...LOL OMG ....

I liked that 4real it was good your first attempt was great but your second was A real good example of a punch .....Nice job

Overall my v/ Mr Multie
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