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Old 09-17-06, 07:30 PM   #13
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first and foremost, tony u swayed at the begining of the battle, never do that again. only i can get away with that shit.

Battle? u dont even wanna fight me, u even dickride me
I mean, look at ur first two letters, u even wanna be like me
^straight up, this isn't play'd since u've never used this on him. the TB initial punches are played yes, but the way u used it was nice. good line here.
So u wanna rap about personals bein played in '04 in this battle
but I see ur point,
tryin to talk about played lines by givin a fuckin example...
^hahaha.. nice. this was harsh and witty cause u proved him wrong 2 times. good, this is what i was wanting to see from u. still, ur wordin could be tweeked on, other than that, straiight punch.

vs.

Are u CRAZY?! i been around longer, so YOU wanna be like ME in this rap shit
Plus we ALL know, TO has been WORTHLESS since he got traded to Dallas!!
^FUCK NO! this has been play'd every week on this nigga. i'm not even sayin anymore..
Not only is this kid weak, predictions prove i'll win, s' no way u can beat me
So dth just got a jump start on things, n changed my rec in advance this week
^this was pretty cool. i liked it cause it was a personal and the first good punch i've seen from u in a while..

this battle was pretty one sided to me. TO took this shit and ran with it, plus tony swayed and thats not cool. but in the long run, TO had two good punches, to tony's one good punch.. and damn tony, ur punch was PLAYED to high hell man.. get fresher concepts.

v/ TeamOne
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