What the fuck where you trying to say? your concept was some shit we all did when we first started rapping fam...you need to use a real topic and drop it on a beat rather then just some of the top nonesence that no one'll feel just coz you toss a bunch of random words around. I can toss big words around with the best of em but that aint true to me and it obviousely aint true to you so just think about making something more concreat rather then being lyrical hustler which is kind of childish in my opinion. not to poke fun or nuthing dawg. just giving some tips. keep it true to yourself by not using that Big word style but at the same time understand that This concept is played and no one wants to peep net gangster tracks nah mean. 1

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..