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Old 09-18-06, 12:24 PM   #2
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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lyrically started off cool but got kind fo weak
alot of multis
flow i dont even know how to jsut text flow to be honest lmao
the beggining part seemed to flow well for the first 4 bars
then your lines got mad stretched and threw the flow off
overall ok
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